Review for Gunshot.

Gunshot.

(#) never0kay 2013-01-24 11:57:56 PM

i can't help but admire how well written these chapters are!

one thing though...frank mentioned his name to gerard once. and then gerard asked him what his name was the next time.

i dont know. maybe it's just me. :)

Author's response

Oh! Thanks for pointing that out! Yeah, I do that sometimes. I forget what the reader knows or doesn't know and I accidentally put something in there that shouldn't be. Thank you so much!

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