Review for Gunshot

Gunshot

(#) motherwarhelena 2013-01-25 08:28:46 AM

"It was sort of a simple happiness, not like that of a proud man accomplished in business, but the small happiness of a child catching a butterfly after endless minutes of chasing. The child’s goal wasn’t to obtain money or materialistic things, but only to enjoy the chase and final capture of the beautiful creature, examine its intricately color-laced wings, and set it free into the air again, just so they could chase after it again."


This line you've written, my friend, is amazing. This is ART.


And by the way, it wasn't too violent so I don't mind at all. In fact I think there should be more of it. (Haha)

Please update soon!

Author's response

oh wow! Thank you! To be honest, I'm pretty proud of that line myself, no to be self-centered or anything :P I'm glad the violence wasn't too much. Thanks!!

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