Ah. Well then. Glad you came back. ^_^
Anyway, you write so well, and gosh, I agree with killjoy_blackrose, I can't find anything to criticize. (And like her, I'm bad at analysis and stuff and I just go "wow, fuck, that's good" and stuff)
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So am I, actually ^^
Wow, thank you ^^ You're so kind (Don't worry, I am too, I tend to do the same thing)