Review for Fullmetal Swimming Lessons
Fullmetal Swimming Lessons
(#) _Sakura_ 2006-11-17 04:05:53 PM
Hi!
I really enjoyed your story. It was in enough detail so that it didn't get confusing, and not so much that it got boring. Update soon! I look forward to seeing how they go in the next lesson... laughs maliciously :P
I really enjoyed your story. It was in enough detail so that it didn't get confusing, and not so much that it got boring. Update soon! I look forward to seeing how they go in the next lesson... laughs maliciously :P
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