Review for All for One

All for One

(#) Rob15 2006-11-18

This is definitely a new turn from the regular fan fics I've read and I can say I couldn't have thought of such a great change. I like how you've made naruto's life a bit kinder than his real life in the actual show, and I can't wait to see what happens next. He also seems to have a chance to be coazy with quite a few ladies, wink wink, lol. But if he does end up with a hyuuga please make it hinata, thats my favorite pair, and also I don't like hinabi. But its your story so far be it for me to force any ideas on you. Way to go so far and I'll be checking for updates!!