Review for MegaMistake

MegaMistake

(#) Mirazal 2013-03-21

WHYYYY
Oh my god, so I might have it wrong but this is all because of the Queen. So she attacks through dreams, so far. I'm pretty sure that's the simplified form.

Times like this is when I wish I was like, a genius, because your writing is really just smartly put together and created and just wow I'm kind of in awe that you've thought all of this up.

-hugs FicWad- which is weird because I'm literally on the website FicWad... And I'm hugging it...

Author's response

WHHHYYY NOTTTT.

I love that you're trying to rationalize this. Yes, you need to hate the Queen. The evil Queen is evil. So far, she's got the ring that does the Red Miles, which can literally tear apart whole planets and people.

Thank you! I've been planning! There's so much Foreshadowing and stuff!

See, that's what I want Ficwad to get. Respect.
She's the youngest player in her session. She's having to put up with growing up, her cousin's sexuality drama, Youtube's mental illness, a sort of unstable guardian, a mentally inept sprite, and she's trying to not get her ass killed.
And she's just a kid.
That's why I included the whole Rp thing with DA. She's not Hermione. She's not Hit Girl. She's just a kid who enjoys playing pretend and listening to MCR.

Oh, and on top of all that, not only when she could've just escaped and let the Miles kill FFN, she saved him by throwing him out of the way and getting punched up herself. So when somebody says she's a weak character, I've got a few words for them.