man, they got close! I loved it how you showed Tristan's insecurity about having sex for the first time, even if it was just the fact that they were located in some backstage sort of area of a night club. Still, I liked that you kept things realistic as you always do and wrote down the seconds thoughts she was having, even though they both know what they want...
Oh, Frank... I can see there's more to his supposed calmness about seeing one of his best friends on top of his little sister, and I can't wait to find out what happens next.. I can't imagine this being the only aftermath of their secret coming out :)
Author's response
More of Frank's reaction is coming in the next chapter. I'm so glad you liked it!