I like it. You show a little more plot to the story when you add the thoughts of the other women in Naruto's life. I would like to see more of the women that we usually don't get to see in the original. Like Tsume, Hana, Tsunami, Karin, or Kin but I asume they well be in there soon. So please keep it up, while perverted, it's a good piece of work.