Really interesting story. It's been a while since I've been on ficwad, so I was out of range for a while. The last story I read was "A world of my own" and I was waiting for a long time for the second part. I'm really glad you started up again with this new story, its really exciting and its a little different from the last story since the main character is older and the story takes place in a world unfamiliar to me. Great story, can't wait for the next chapter.
Did you ever publish your e-book of "A world of my own"?
10/10