Yo, not sure if you recognize my username, but I'm Stormarrow's beta reader and more often then not a wall for bouncing ideas back and forth. I would like to start by saying great work on this, this is a really great start and I would love to see more. I'll follow this up by extending an application. Either for beta reading for help with idea, I'm your guy, jut send me a PM or even send me an email if you prefer at (my username) at yahoo dot com.
I'd like to request some Hinata action. Sounds like she has a body basically made for sex, so I'd love to see how well she can handle the object of her affections.