Review for call my name

call my name

(#) mychemicalpony 2013-06-30 03:15:21 PM

Good everything really apart from the weird paragraph thing, like you'll start a new paragraph in the middle of a sentence like "Gerard brushed his

Teeth and brushed his hair" and it makes it a bit hard to read, and also when you are saying you are, you write it as you're not your. But anyway, apart from that it's really good and I'm intrigued as to find out how Frank copes and stuff :)

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