Review for The Lemon Games

The Lemon Games

(#) breakthrough 2013-07-19

This story is freakin' awesome with how you've taken the oft-cheesy videogame approach to the Narutoverse. I was pleasantly surprised by the depth and thought you've obviously put into it.

I do have a couple questions though. As a personal sucker for Tayuya and FemHaku, I was wondering if these two would make it into the Harem. You did mention at the beginning of the story that certain individuals would be revived for the sake of the game, so I'm just curious who you're going to pull out next.

On that note, how big do you plan on making this harem anyway? The anime is rife with filler girls, and it's always nice to see authors take these characters and turn them into something unique.

Finally, with all the powerups and perks Naruto's been getting, is your version of say Madara or Obito getting appropriately scaled so that Naruto doesn't curbstomp the both of them? Or is there an even bigger baddie, like the creator of the game itself??

Thanks for your time, and thanks for such speedy updates!! Hope your creative energy keeps this steady pace til this thing is completed!

Author's response

Tayuya is essentially in the harem just by living with Naruto. I do plan another scene with her later one. As for a female Haku, I'll tell you the same thing I have told others who asked about it. I'll work it in if I can, but don't hold your breath.

This is a sexual based parody story, no matter the depth or thought I have placed into it. I admit, I like to think that The Lemon Games is a little better than others due to a few deciding factors such as the fact I try to have some semblance of a plot. That being said, the harem's limit is not set in stone. Will some girls make a bigger appearance or impact on Naruto? Absolutely but that's because every author has their favorite characters or gets excited about an idea. Such as the Fuu and Nanabi chapter, I posted that less than two days after I posted the Kagero, Sasame, and Kotohime chapter which took me over a week to finish.

In regards to the enemies, I haven't figured out if I will scale them somewhat appropriately, I like Naruto being a badass so he will likely still end up curb stomping both of them after some chapter long epic battle, but I will say this much. Naruto WILL NOT face the creator of the game, I repeat WILL NOT. Naruto WILL however eventually come in contact with the game's creator.