Review for The Lemon Games

The Lemon Games

(#) JudgeMidners 2013-07-20

Haven't reviewed any of the previous chapters but thought I'd do it now :)

I like it, it's plot and smut in one. Most people who do game versions take it way out of control and have little to no imagination so kudos to you for this.

I would however consider making a separate page for stats instead of adding it at the end of each chapter, if you keep going like this the stat part of a chapter is gonna get longer than the actual chapters after a while :)

Either way, great fic and keep it up!

//Sey