This chapter is good but there are a few discrepencies for the Sand Sirens medal you put Sand Princesses in the paragraph after it and when Naruto increases his Massage skills it says:
Seventy-two points left, Naruto skimmed through the skills and spotted one. It wasn’t one for him, but rather for the girls. Naruto poured eighty points into it.
It just takes a bit from the story with really tiny errors like this because it gets confusing understandable why you missed it though.
Author's response
Again, it's a lot of math and I tend not to think sometimes. I think with that one I meant to put 'he brought it up to eighty points.'