Review for The Lemon Games

The Lemon Games

(#) Akuma-Heika 2013-07-26

Naruto also noticed the seal on her shoulder blade that held the Nanabi back.
The seals have to be on the abdomen over the Sea of Chakra (In Naruto it is represented as a blue fire in the stomach when shown in diagrams or Byakugan). Also causes mutations to the children of female jinchurriki from what we have been shown (perhaps only cosmetic though). Naruto fixed it; although the spine is in danger of positioning. Even if it is no longer malicious it is a large amount of power.

Yes, well we technically have two mothers. The first is… our… origins. The Juubi. The second is the Sage of Six Paths, a noble woman if there ever was one.” Kyuubi spoke in his mind.
Will the SAGE be resurrected? It is the only conclusion I can think of to change his gender.


“Yes Naruto-sama, Ichi told me everything that Kyuu-sama told her
Shouldn't it be Kyuu-neesama? Ichiand Nana called each other sisters and Kyuu did so in Naruto's head.

Curious about the other positions of the Biju and why you had the Sage give them such positions. Will we see other demons? Are the biju demons? The Juubi was a god (somewhere between Khaos and Gaia of Greek myth). So are they demons or lesser deities? Perhaps Majin (Demon Gods).

Four defensive element perks and one offensive one...although with his regeneration the earth was noast needed especially since 2 of the remaining of elements cannot hurt him and 1 cannot if he is focused (for lightning his defense even gives him an attack). Fire not much defense outside of manipulating his opponents attacks...but he does have shinra tensei. Initially I was expecting pure defense but reading the options earth offense it good. Fire reminds me of Overlord Fire Lvl 3 spells though lol. Burning vengeance sounded like a boosted Amaterasu though.

Why would TRUE Mokuton need Kenjutsu?

For true EMS why would he need Rinnegan? Madara got that when he was pretty much incapable of fighting so he could use the EMS fine without it. In accordance with the True Mokuton shouldn't it be the Curse of Hatred perk needed?

Would have expected the will of fire to be more of a passive survival skill. why would that be needed for mokuton? Sounds more like Susanno'ou.

He then tapped on Taijutsu. “Bruce Lee or Chuck Norris?” Naruto was a little confused about why the ‘Chuck Norris’ option was crossed out and therefore un-selectable.
lol

Author's response

At no point, I believe, did they say that the seals must be over the abdomen. It makes sense, sure, but I don't think it's ever been made canon.

I admittedly haven't finished decided if the Sage will be resurrected. I made the Sage a female on a whim

Hmm, you're probably right that it should be Kyuu-neesama, but I'm not Japanese and I'm doing the best I can. I do try though so I might make it more.

Yes, we will see the other Biju. Do you really think I would leave six other possible females for Naruto out of this? Hell no! As for the Juubi being a God, was that in one of the recent chapters? I stopped reading just after the flashback with Madara and Hashirama started. Canon has pissed me off too much.

Fire isn't necessarily a 'Defensive' perk. Imagine, if you will, Naruto grabbing his opponent's head. Yeah, instant cooked brains.

True Mokuton, hmm... well I guess it has to do with Hashirama using swords.

Rinnegan, eh same with the Kenjutsu. That Curse of Hatred sounds interesting though, I might have to come up with something for that.

When I get to Naruto using his Susanoo, it will make a lot of sense why the Will of Fire perk is sort of like the Susanoo but not.

Yes, I'm a Bruce Lee fan.