(#) lleon 2013-08-06
Wow, this was wow! I don't know what the heck this chapter was but it was different all right...
Author's response
Thanks! I have this idea that if it's not disreputable and unsettling, you're doing fanfiction wrong. Hopefully I live up to that standard at least occasionally throughout the story!
That said, I can't honestly say that Chapter 16 advanced the plot much. :)