Can I say how much I've come to appreciate this story? I've been a fan of this for a while even when it was back on FF.net (still remember the unpleasant surprise of finding this gone and not knowing where to find it.)
However since then I've discovered something. Other stories with harem plots take their stories and inject them with unhealthy amounts of melodrama, trying (and for the most part failing horribly) at writing real relationships among multiple women like they have a goddamn clue what they're talking about.
Here however? Naruto gets achievements and XP for fucking every which way he can concieve of (or rather you can). With this you've actually allowed some fucking fun in this genre. For that I am grateful, along with the fact that the lemon scenes are really damn hot.
Author's response
Can I saw how much I've come to appreciate the fans that have enjoyed this story since it was on FF.net?
I try to write this story the way I originally intended it to. I wanted to take the concept of stories with wonderful lemony goodness and add in the aspect of it having a Video Game feel to it in a small way at least. I had never seen a video game story that had lemons in it, nonetheless one that was solely lemons.
But as I've progressed through the story, I wanted to add fight scenes so people could get a feel for how far Naruto has come. I try to make them realistic and not have Naruto one-side everyone, but it might very well happen. I don't know how the story will eventually progress.
I add melodrama to my story. Just look at Chapter 17. Tsunade gets upset in an understandable way, Naruto helps her through it and they bang. I don't see the point of dragging the melodrama on and on in a story that's porn with very little plot.
I would like to say thank you for finding my Lemon scenes nice and hot. I have found that I've been disappointed with the feel of other lemon stories because they don't give quite a bit of depth to the lemon scenes. Five paragraphs and they're done. I wanted to give them a little more depth, say what each partner felt and was doing. Now I can't write too much on the character's thrusting because let's face it, they're ain't a whole lot you can write about that. but saying if the character is nibbling somewhere, grabbing something, that's stuff that makes a Lemon Scene hot in my opinion.