Review for Love Doesn't Always Work Out

Love Doesn't Always Work Out

(#) davidthesquirrel 2013-09-15

Hi! I Haven't talked to you in a while! I really enjoyed how well you managed the delicate situation this story is based around. I personally have no problem with Mikey and Sarah though I did love Mikey and Alicia, and I'd like to think their relationship ended as you wrote in this story. Great writing! Keep it up!

Author's response

Oh hey! I'm glad you enjoyed it, I tried to make it kind of neutral... Like this is how I like to imagine the situation went down as well, happy endings for all and no broken hearts.

I admit that I didn't like Sarah at first because I was just so taken aback by the situation, but I realized how stupid it was to dislike her. And I'm sure she is a lovely person to be dating such a great guy.

Thank you! You are such a fantastic writer yourself, so that means a lot to me.