I´m not even gonna brag that I am the first to review this chapter filled with goodness because, frankly, it´s not even a challenge anymore. I mean, I can hear Crystal snoring all the way over to Austria and Katy´s hogging my blanket right now... um, nevermind...
I still like this narrator a lot, even though, I must admit, that saying Patrick is NOT the cutest sleeper makes me wonder about their being in touch with reality. ;)
Thank you for the flashback. I think the overall story profits a lot from it.
And, in addition to not being the cutest sleeper, Patrick obviously also doesn´t know when to keep his tasty ass in Meg´s apartment. I think a Sheena quote would come in handy here: "Meet Patrick Stump, everyone. "Musical genius, romantic dimwit."
Author's response
i was making him too sappy, and , like crystal said, that's not real. i needed a drama-rama chapter anyway. i thought that was important to any story. man. i JUST got out of bed and i'm not functioning so well.