Review for Channel Hopping
(#) whatkatydid 2006-11-26 08:28:51 AM
The lawyer's scene is amazing, I mean it, I was there with them, how you described all the mannerisms, the body language, the words. It was so moving.
You wrote Pete's feelings really truthfully too, the hint of his egotism coming through was just enough to sympathize with him and not want to smack the Emo growl off his face.
As usual, you raise the bar higher.
Nice work , seriously.
I feel my sincerity isn't coming through....but it should.
Ok, raising the bar higher... well, I guess with the DoJ the limbo dance time is over.
FRERARD! Just a short oneshot about reality..please R&R :) edited it slightly- 16/6/11
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Important message in chapter four. Please read it.
Yes, yes, auditions. Note added.
More auditions. Haven't done this in a while. Notes added.
Could you walk away from everything you know? Start again with a dangerous stranger? Could I do it? ...
"So you're like, my bitch now?" :FRERARD: