Review for Eroninja

Eroninja

(#) One-Of-The-Sin 2014-10-06

Ok maybe the fan dance is old but other thinks are copied from others. And I am not surprised that you are saying about not taking seriously. I was right and like a politician you will deny it and try to not take it seriously. And about Suckura and Sasugay are those bitches that will never change ever. and Again JIRAIYA DOESN'T APPROVES THIS FIC AS THIS IS CHEAP COPY.

Author's response

I don't take you seriously because you don't take the time to explain your point instead relying on childish name calling to try and get it across. Sure it was big of you to admit that you didn't know that the fandance was an actual thing. But how seriously can I take a person that says, "Ok maybe the fan dance is old but other thinks are copied from others"

I also don't take you seriously because as an author you created a pair of stories and then just abandoned them after the first chapter. Perhaps because you didn't get enough attention or what not, rather than writing for the love of it and hoping more people would pay attention to your works. Also, I don't take you seriously because a fanficition writer should never say that a character can't change and should be willing to take the time to improve the characters they don't like instead just labeling them as you have. I don't particularly care for Sasuke, but I have read stories where he has been redeemed because the author took the time to do so in a meaningful way.

However, I never said that I didn't take inspiration from some of my lemons from other sources. I merely pointed out that you would have built a better case for yourself had you taken the time to actually list what them, rather than throwing out broad generalizations such as the above sentence where "others are taken from others" as you put it so eloquently. For example, Maki's scene was a nod to the ending of Basic Instinct. Naruto saying, "I could titfuck you all day," came from the hentai Lingerie offices, but everything else about the scene was all me, although as you can only make the broadest of comparisons I can understand why you have trouble seeing that as he was getting a titjob at the time. Also, one of the upcoming plotlines which has the "seeds" already planted takes heavy inspiration from one of the first Hentai videos I ever saw. Do you see how the above was done? If you had put that then perhaps I could take you seriously, but I was under no obligation to help build your case for you, and truthfully felt giving you more examples would just cause you to claim to have "seen" them yourself even if you hadn't.

In the end what I am writing is called fanfiction. I'm playing in someone else's sandbox as it were, so of course I'm inspired by other sources. Hell one of the reasons I don't use O.C's is because I would prefer to use characters with built in fanbases then create my own which only I care about. Most of my readers already know all the above they understand that fanfiction is about taking the things you enjoy and giving it new life in a world you help to shape, but you are simply a close-minded individual that thinks that shouting his opinion about a work which dwarfs anything he has put out there with namecalling and all capitals is the same as explaining it. If you think you can do better than I challenge you to do so, your own works after all could use some attention considering their pathetic and unfinished states.