I like the fact that it isn't a typical 'happy ending' romance. The characters are OOC but it's still kinda believable.
There are a few spelling mistakes but the story is so good that you don't really notice them.
-turns to PARCD and starts to laugh-
I'd like to see you force Raven to do ANYTHING you pathetic piece of bellybutton lint.
o.O....bellybutton lint? -laughs histerically- Roojii, only you would say something like that... Damn girl I love it when you insult people!