Review for Eroninja

Eroninja

(#) MattyD 2015-02-09

I've read through this story twice in as many years, but never thought to comment or review. Going through it this time I'm going to hit every chapter and let you know how I've felt about it going forward.

Everything plot wise is fine, though I have noticed a weird tendency for run on sentences, or odd pauses during a particular thought process.

Still, over all very nice. You capture Ino's hesitancy/irritation between Naruto and Sakura, as well as set the stage for a rather ecchi storyline to continue. I know I'll probably get annoyed as I tend to during Naruto's more emo moments as he has them fairly regularly through out the story (Least he did the last time I did a read through), but I'll write down what I've thought concerning those instances as I approach those chapters.

Write on, good maestro.