Must say, best HP starwars cross over I've read so far, and surprisingly only the second where Harry remained a good guy; in almost all of them he seems to become a sith or close to.
I will say that I didn't much care for Harry's premature death, especially as they did have the philosopher's stone (and if I recall right it was never said it was destroyed); I would have had him live to the same age as his wive's at the very least.
Nice twist in Ron's death; or at least I felt it was a twist, everything seemed to be pointing towards him becoming a Sith in my opinion.