Review for Eroninja

Eroninja

(#) akiratepes 2015-03-17

I love your stories especially Eroninja and Limelight the only problem is I find myself reading Eroninja and I hit a point where it references to something the is done in Limelight without there having had been any notice or anything of the Limelight chapter having occurred before reaching said point. For example during the Konoha/Suna Training some Suna-nin comment on a previous exercise that Sakura and Naruto did, an event that sees the light in Limelight. Now I don't expect you to go and combine the two stories or anything like that but putting in a heads-up of some kind in the story whether is simply in the authors note of the previous chapter or when you reach the point within a chapter that a Limelight occurred putting down a simply heads-up like, "Limelight Chapter 2." I realize that in the Limelights you put up a heads up of where it would be but could you do the reverse too? Like at the start of Chap. 31 Saying "Limelight Chapter 2 occurs during this Chapter."

Author's response

I can't really promise to do that. For one, I don't want people to feel like they have to read Limelight to enjoy this story. The second part is because Limelight is secondary to the main story so I might post a Limelight weeks or months after the chapter that it is tied to. For example in Night Terror Part I, I reference how Naruto has taken Tsunade to Moon Country for her Birthday. This will be the setting for her Limelight chapter which I haven't finished yet. Also, if the story gets further ahead of where I want to put a particular Limelight chapter I might not even reference it at all in the main story and just state where it happens time wise in Limelight. I hope that makes some sense.