I finished your story about ten minutes ago, and I really really enjoyed it :)
I'm a big GN'R fan, and I thought I was the only one who wrote stories about them.
I was kinda sad at the end, but the story is great though, because although is was very romantic in some many ways, it wasn't suposse to end up like a Disney fairytale or something.
Anyway, keep writing stories, you are amazing Mary Jane!