Your summary made me curious and I'm glad I read your story because it was so funny !! And I totally agree to you: Golbez is so ententaining to tease XD I don't know wich part I prefer ! Maybe the shamefull situation with Fusoya or Cecil loosing the situation with his son's request.
You mangaged to give a true development, finishing with the youngest prising his (involuntarily) outfit. I'm playing The After Years right now so it's echoed with my surprise discovering Golbez's style.
Thank you for your refreshing story ! (and sorry for my mistakes, I'm not english-speaker but I'm trying my best ^^)