I really liked how you directed your story. The dialogues were VERY pleasing (good job, you !), each of them with their specific personnality, and the atmosphere around them was captivating. Their differences (personnality and culture) was, paradoxically, what meant to reunite them. Your approach was original, I liked it. I do love this couple and it's a shame there is not much stories with them, so I was even more happy to found yours ! I hope you will be inspired with another fanfiction for Kain and Edge ^^ (and sorry if my english seems fishy or wrong, I'm trying my best :p)