Could he handle all of her baggage? No, certainly not. -> Is that because he [Patrick] has gained some baggage of his own in the course of the last months? Is it that I don´t even hesitate to insult Hat Rack just to appear to be funny because I´m Asshole Spice? I guess the answer to both of these questions is yes.
I love the way Patrick uses music as a vent for his frustration and probably anger. It seems like an authentic Patrick thing to do. :) (That and being shamelessly cute.)
”Patrick, I can read you like a playboy,” Pete said… -> That´s the stuff, baby. Hilarious. Smooches.
"Hey there, ninja," Pete said leaning down to block him from running into his privates as little kids tend to do. -> As little kids, Ashlee Simpson and the members of the DoJ tend to do if only given the chance.
HA! (Sorry, the use of bold is totally inappropriate here.) I KNEW it! Jackson´s not CoCo´s son. I rock. Kinda. Sometimes.
She found herself wondering what it would be like to kiss those lips and to wake up in those arms again. -> It´s pretty good, Collette. Take it from me. Ha.
On a further (Asshole Spice) note, check out what I wrote in the review section of Crystal´s latest chapter. I got you beat, Stubborn Spice. ;)
Author's response
HEY! Be nice to Patrick! He's too nice to be rippin' on. Just like me :) Ha Ha....I'm just kidding.
Thanks for the review. I'm thrilled that I got a smooches for being funny. It's slow going, but I'm trying!
I'll have to look at your review on Crystal's story....what did you say???
Stay wonderful!