(#) brad 2016-06-08
Wow. You're really going to do it, aren't you? Destroy the world.
Just give me a minute.
Wow. Not often a superhero story lets that happen. I'm hoping you don't let that happen. Maybe the Earth will be saved but Raven will nonetheless be 'stranded' in this other dimension.
But you seem to have set up the heroes with no recourse. The Clatorians have assimilated micro-organisms, no villains to fight. Whew.
I'm not up on my Teen Titans and I'm weakest on Raven but I think I know enough to track this story (with your supplied exposition). I'm enjoying the read.
Author's response
Thanks for the review, Brad. This is mostly a character study of Raven and her reactions. And you're right, of course -- canon stories can't usually end the world, makes it difficult to write (and sell) the next story