I suspect that English is not this author's mother tongue as a very poor grasp of the language is evident throughout this story. The text is littered with spelling mistakes, terrible grammar and missing punctuation. I also noticed errors in the plot line. Shoddy.
Thank you for the response Soap-dodger, i shall fix all the errors. This was mainly a test. Thanks again for the feedback!
Soap-dodger, I am proud to say that me and my partner fixed most of the errors, If you would like you could read over it again and report back to us. We thank you for your feedback!