Review for Instant Weasley

Instant Weasley

(#) Ithilwen 2006-03-27

What a delightful premise! With a million counterfeit Weasleys running around, Fred and George can always argue that it wasnt them or that they had an alibi.

Wonderful!

There are lots of minor editing issues:

I think you mean "traumatized." If you fix it, you'll probably get more hits.

"What one more Weasley..." said Fred?

The question mark is supposed to go before the quote. There's no question that Fred's spoken.



Author\'s Response: Thanks for reading, fixed the errors. I appreciate the pointers. :)