Reading through for my second time, and I have given myself the job of reviewing every chapter.
So as for chapter one, The use of a new minor character in Kanji is brilliant as it seamlessly explains the acquisition of the new jutsu and allows for the plot of Naruto to continue unaffected until this turning point. Naruto's character in this story truly reflects how one would expect him to after his training, rather than having him revert to his brattish behavior. The mix of sex and plot did seem a little overdone but this is do to needing to set up the rest of the story. Overall, well written with minor grammatical or spelling errors to be expected in a solo endeavor as large as this. 9/10 Great start for a great story.