Alright, three and I promise final time I review chapter one, but by the gods Lemon Sage! I decided to reread the entire story again after the amazing chapter that just came out. I really loved this opening, strong, explanative, and ties the old story in beautifully. Knowing everything I do now, man did your level of foreshadowing far exceed what I thought, and mind you I already thought you had the best foreshadowing of any author I have ever read. Just amazing.
Alright, I'll stop re-reviewing chapter one now but just know that if I do keep rereading this story when your new chapters come out. I might have to come back to say how amazing it is again.