Wait a minute. WHEN does this take place? Before the attack of Pain...after the WAR.
Doesn't specify does it? I take it that the story takes place in an AU seeing as THIS Naruto knows what his mother looks like from Photos and not his experience in fighting Kurama to control his Chakra. So before WAR arc. No mention of Nagato? Before Pain invasion.
Apart from that the lemons and shit is good. 9/10 will read again.