Well I do not even start reading it. You seems to be on the rapist and child abuser lovers plus the lot of homosexual lovers meaning you are one. Aparently you are in love with snape the rapist(all death eaters are rapist and killers) so this is just an stupid homo story.
Author's response
well, unlike most of my fics, Snape survives in this one and is used by Harry to succeed, but I don't think the rest applies; no slash in this one, either, but suit yourself