no offense, but, it sounds like you are having one big pitty fest. In fact, i almost felt guilty i didnt bring a box of tissues. i couldnt help but roll my eyes and i've heard this type of poem a million times before. i didnt care for it at ALL!!
Well, I'm sorry if this didn't appeal to you. It is not a pity fest though, it is just my way of dealing with certain emotions I was having at the time I wrote this. I don't want anybody to pity me, and I certainly don't pity myself. Still, you're entitled to your own opinion.