OK, I must say this...we are brilliant. And I really like the little game at the end where you guess who wrote it. Since I already know, I guess I can't play...oh well.
Great job mystery writer, you did the first chapter justice. I just hope I can live up to our insane imaginations.
Author's response
yea, mystery author says: you can't play unless no one else reviews our story. since we at the DoJ don't like to name drop, we aren't going to mention anything about cows, babies, or 4dances...but i would like to say thank you. my mystery writing skills didn't suck (… :O ….) so bad for this chapter.