Awwww! You're right, we do need more Ed/Al. The pace of this story is very well done, I have to say. It leads the reader on into thinking that Ed and Al are getting ready for separate dates on the same night, and then just as the reader is understanding what they just read- 'a man with no pants'- and their brain goes, Oh, now wait a second... boom! You slam them with the last line. Masterful! The only thing I have to complain about is that you spelled Al's name wrong: it's Alphonse, not Alfonse. Otherwise, keep it up! I really enjoy reading your work.