Review for Unknown Name
(#) KarmasMessenger 2006-12-07 03:10:10 PM
Perhaps in a few years you will grow from this phase and actually improve. For now, unfortunately, your stories and poetry come across as very cliché. You, I am sure, see them as the most unique pieces in the world, which is a shame. They are banal and lifeless. In the future, I hope you are able to see past your own perceived greatness enough to create something original. For now, your stories are the same cookie-cutter teenage angst filled emo that every other low self-esteem driven teenager regurgitates and posts, believing it to be a true masterpiece.
Well, maybe in time you will outgrow this juvenile stage. Again, please feel free to post a response as it will only support my theory.
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