Review for Displacement


(#) Indigo 2006-04-06

Go Erik. ahem
You can really feel Raoul's denial and annoyance and discomfort. I really can feel pity for him.
You have the voices just right. adds to favourites

Author\'s Response: Thank you. Erik can be tricky to pin down tone wise, so it's good to know I managed it this time 'round.