Review for Displacement

Displacement

(#) Indigo 2006-04-06 09:59:22 AM

Go Erik. ahem
You can really feel Raoul's denial and annoyance and discomfort. I really can feel pity for him.
You have the voices just right. adds to favourites



Author\'s Response: Thank you. Erik can be tricky to pin down tone wise, so it's good to know I managed it this time 'round.

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