Review for Addict For Dramatics

Addict For Dramatics

(#) pixied_secrets 2006-12-10 01:01:55 PM

you proper usage of "hoebageler" made laugh. hard. really hard.

lola is really concerned about letting joe in on the fact that pete is a major douchebag. but didn't joe see pete with jeanne at the party? as an older brother, wouldn't that piss him off too? he seems a little oblivious.

i wish the smurfs mug didn't have to be broken in vain. now, had she actually pelted the sonofabitch with it, there would be proper justification. but damn.

you deserve a rating point for that thing you do. because your writing is fantastical.

Author's response

That, my friend, is what we call a plothole. Let's just pretend that Joe was far too busy smoking weed and scoring with girls of legal age.

P.S. I knew I'd make you proud with the use of hoebageler.

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