“Her best friend was missing and possibly dead. Her car exploded. She had been shot at.
Ava wished she had never won the free tickets to the concert. It wasn't worth it.” -> This I found very amusing. The wording I mean. ;) “not worth” is it a slight understatement. I can tell you have a cool sense of humor, ma’am.
"Ah," Patrick said in a low voice, "Sleeping Beauty awakes." -> Ah, just think that the Hatrack is actually saying that to you. shivers Teenage fantasies come true. Or rather, twenty-something fantasies come true.
Yeah, I hope you don’t mind that I just HAD to drop a rating point on this chapter. Your story is plonktacular. I like it lots.
Produce more. Now. NOW. :)
Author's response
Thank you foor all the praise! I get really inspired reading it and it makes me keep writing on this story when I should really be studying for finals. (Who cares about psychology, anyway. lol)