Oh my god, this story is amazing, I have no idea how I didn't read it earlier. I guess since I got to read straight through the chapters up until this point all at once I can really see the evolution of Pete. You do an amazing job of transforming him over time- a lot of writers get too excited and make huge changes almost instantly, but yours is right on target! Keep up the amazing work, and update soon!
You, dude, just did me the biggest favor a reader could do me by reading this from chappie one up to this point. My biggest worry about this story was not being able to show a gradual change in Pete.
You have no idea how much this review means to me. :) It totally made my day (lucky me, read it in the morning). :)))
Thanks for taking the time to r&r. It always means the most to me. I owe you.