This chapter was breath-taking. (In a very good way, duh. ;) )
Unfortunately I just ran out of rating points but I'll come back tomorrow and drop off a "moving" one. ;) Because this really was moving and stunning and beautiful in a sad way.
However, of course, I did note the humor. I love your writing style. Very refreshing. Keep up the good work! :)
P.S.: I used Ava in the one-shot I started yesterday. I hope you don't mind. I guess not since it was your encouraging review on "Group Therapy" that made me decide to write another humorous (hopefully) original character gathering. ;) It will be posted on Monday, I think.
Author's response
Yay! :)