Review for The Seduction of Light
Wow, that was beautiful, it was just... amazing. I loved the painting's description it was great. The entire story caught me off gaurd. It wasn't what I was expecting to read when I came to ficwad.
It feels petty to point this out but you did have one un-capitalized 'i' in there, somewhere in the middle (yeah, I know really helpful description) but don't worry about it too much. I'm still in too much shock over the actual story to care much. There was something about it that I really liked... I can't exactly explain it...
And I've looked for that 'i', just cause you mentioned it and I'm anal, so I think I've found it. Dunno if I'll be putting up the 'revised' version or not, but thank you for mentioning it anyways laughs
Again, thanks very much! And I'm sorry I leave long responces....Ah well
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just kinda winging this one but once I'm done I'll bang out a summary lol
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