(#) BenRG 2006-04-10
Overall a good story, although I think it ended far too quickly. I would have carried on for at least another chapter serving as an epilogue, filling out the future in a series of vinigettes, including inserts of the start of year 6 & 7, revealing Harry's girl and the final battle.
The end of Dumbledore was a strange anticlimax but it fitted the concept of an old man with failing health who was steadily losing his mind. I also think that Snape's end was handled correctly too. One way or another, it was always likely that he would meet his end for treachery, either at the hands of the dark or the light.
BenRG's Overall rating: 7/10