Review for Chosen
Chosen
(#) Ithilwen 2006-04-10 11:04:13 AM
This wasn't as funny as it could have been. The way you build it up, it's far too obvious that whoever's on the other side won't be what Marie expects.
Perhaps you should remove the "this is a Mary Sue parody" tipoff from the summary and use it as ending credits instead.
Perhaps you should remove the "this is a Mary Sue parody" tipoff from the summary and use it as ending credits instead.
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