I'm not actually a big pokemon fan, but I like your story anyway. It provides a realism that the show never could capture, which was one of the reasons I stopped watching the show a long time ago. thought I'd let you know.
Cjon the Bloodletter
conqueror of the dark realms
Author's response
Thank you very much. I can't stand the show for about the exact same reason plus the complete lack of meaningful plot and character development. However, I am addictted to the gamesm which is why I write.