Review for The Mistake

The Mistake

(#) FrostedGlass 2006-12-21

Oh, hello, Dr. Heinrich. Do you speak any German?
I had a Heinrich kid in my English class once (first name though). In the same class that Sheena (the little girl I stole the name from) was in. ;) Yeah, I know EVERYBODY is interested in my ramblings…

“Adlerian technique” -> research or plain common knowledge? Anyways, I love it when writers’ prove they actually know something about what they’re writing. (Even though, that’s pretty tough competition for me then… ;) )

I love the whole Wendy’s-past/ party paragraph. Thanks for giving us more insight into the characters and your marvelous (one or two l, Katy? I forget.) way with words.

Hm… mumbles something incoherently Sorry… just had to pick up my jaw there…

WHOA. (I know, you are in awe of my fine mastery of the English language. Me too, actually.) I am deeply impressed. That’s some interesting plot twist. I am so much into this story! So much that I just can’t help but use bold lettering.

The phone conversation with Patrick was completely believable and authentic.

I love this story. It’s art.

Take a rating point. (Stupid me wanted to hit “insightful” but accidentally chose “moving”. But I guess that’s kinda related so no harm done. ;) )

Update soon. I’m addicted.

Author's response

One of my majors is psychology, so I've had to learn the techniques, thus the common knowledge of the Adlerian way... Dr. Heinrich is actually my psych teacher and since psychology origionated in Germany, I felt it would be good to have a German name...